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Descriptive: How does word choice allow the reader to "enter the scene?" Narrative: Is the story told as it happens? Does it answer questions about what took place as you read? |
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| How does the lead sentence draw you into the piece? |
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| Ideas are presented in logical sequence. |
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| Effective use of language |
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| Paragraph has a clear purpose |
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| Spelling and language conventions |
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| Appropriate to audience |
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| Final sentence draws closure to the piece |
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