Self Edit Guide:
Comments:

Descriptive: How my words allow the reader to "enter the scene?"

Narrative: Is the story told as it happens and does it answer the reader's questions about what took place through the writing?

 
Good lead sentence

 

 

Ideas presented in logical sequence

 

 

Effective use of language

 

 

Paragraph has a clear purpose

 

 

Spelling and language conventions

 

 

Appropriate to audience

 

Closing sentence brings a sense of closure to the piece